Hope you all are have a fabulous 2014 so far. As I've said, the more drafts I do, the more the characters evolve. For your reading pleasure (hopefully), I am giving you part of an added scene in "Descent" (Book 1):
The first real kiss of Dorothy and Carl when they are out on their first solo date together.
In the first draft, I did gloss over that (for reasons I'll explain in a vlog I'm going to do), but with the new drafts, the scene began coming to life (as did a couple others that show the development of their relationship before all the shit begins hitting the fan).
So, hope you enjoy the new scene (the book is still is going through editing, so bear with me).