Also, check out some further character development in some excerpts from the second draft in the SAMPLES section.
AUTHOR'S SIDE NOTE: I do like the band Switchblade Symphony. However, I was imagining how a 40-year-old man from the year 1931 who was born ten years before the turn of the 20th century would feel if he heard it. :)
Here is the Switchblade Symphony song that is featured in this scene: