Wednesday, August 14, 2013

PART 2, THE FIRST EVIL, 1931-1933: Third Interlude (UNEDITED)

I lied about Chapter 32.  There is actually a third interlude before Chapter 32.

If you are just catching up, see the CHAPTERS section to read the Prologue-Chapter 31 before proceeding to the Chapter 32 which will be up shortly.

Also, check out some further character development in some excerpts from the second draft in the SAMPLES section. 

Otherwise, read from the word go :)


Dorothy was back again.  Back in the woods.  She stood in the same white dress she had been in the last time she was there, surveying the area.  It was twilight and a beautiful evening and there was even a slight breeze.  The trees towered over her, whispering as they had done before, though Dorothy could not make out their words.
Dorothy turned to see him standing beside her.  He was also back.  The little Romani boy she had seen before.  The boy who wandered this forest in an aimless.
He gazed up at her and she down at him.  They were locked in their stares before the boy extended his hand to Dorothy.  They understood one another and what they needed to do.  What he needed her to see.

Dorothy took his hand and the two of them began to walk together in silence through the brush.

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